Falling Poem by Tears In Rain

Falling

Rating: 5.0


With each endeavored flight
He’s leveled
Ground
That fallen down
That's falling down

Each word like water
Drops, fails, whirls
Around
Then falls on down
They’re falling down

His story
Skips like stone
Not hitting home
Now slowly
Sinks
Submerged
Then wholly drowned
It’s falling down
It’s falling down

Ascent denied
His ankles tied
He’s beaten,
Battered
Dented, crowned
A fallen clown
Still falling down

So still
As tears in rain
He’s falling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivy Christou 04 November 2005

this was very good.. it is heartfelt and very well written! well done HBH

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Uriah Hamilton 26 October 2005

quite often I have the same feeling of dissolving.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 26 October 2005

Iiiiiiiiiii like it! Very very good I ecspecially love that end part. Lylyanna

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