Falling Asleep At 5: 30 Poem by Charles Chaim Wax

Falling Asleep At 5: 30

Rating: 5.0


in the afternoon
the sweetest part of my life
no solutions
life stained
an adamantine wrinkle
in my heart
wanting oblivion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uriah Hamilton 10 November 2005

I think I like being asleep better than being awake, I really do.

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham 09 November 2005

interesting poem...one i really enjoyed reading...where would we be without those renewing naps? best regards-faith

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 09 November 2005

On which side of 5: 30 was this poem written, Charles. It 'feels' like one of those nap inspired 'things'. Nice.

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