Falling Fast Poem by Kille and Brim (young poets)

Falling Fast

Rating: 4.8


Falling fast & dieing faster
Everthing I do or say won't last here
Even if I hide my fear
You will still try to be near
But I will be fine my dear
Anyways you can't prove what you can't hear
Even if I lose some tears
You can not protact me here

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 21 July 2017

How much sorrow the last two lines carry up? The poet is simply elegant.

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love and death 18 June 2007

u 2 r 1 of da best poets i know. loved it keep it up :) ps. don't lose faith

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Dan Jensen 10 March 2007

Really nice poem. I love the way you write your rhymes. And if I am allowed to do this? *Hug from Dan* Dan J.

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Tears From A Soldiers Eyes 20 February 2007

NICE POEM I LIKED IT KEEP IT COMING

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