Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Falling in Love.


Can be nothing less than sometime
Encountering briefly one pair of eyes
Meeting your own, with opining
Conviction that can't be disguised.
There's been a meeting of souls.
A love at first sight, a homing
Towards long sought -after goals
Of oneness. Now fate is enthroned,
With inner desires aspiring
To taste the first fruits, and to bite
Into deep passion. Love feels right.

Or, falling in love can, instead
Need considerable time, a first
Liking can turn into steady
Approval of traits, non the worse
For a second or third viewing.
Thus love begins growing, with quiet
Admiration, needing no cues
From seductive signs, with diet
Of everyday care, friendship might
Become love. This too can feel right.

There is no better or worse way.
True love calls, but better to stay
Upright before starting to fall
As love can make more than one call.

Submitted: Saturday, November 22, 2008

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Comments about this poem (Falling in Love. by Fay Slimm )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Viola Grey (11/22/2008 8:50:00 PM)

    this is simply wonderful...I am definately the second type of love...great write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (11/22/2008 11:58:00 AM)

    It is with in all our capabilities to fall in love onenever know but hopes 10 Chris (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Balch (11/22/2008 11:08:00 AM)

    Love is everywhere, and there for all 10 for a lovely piece. Regards Tom (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (11/22/2008 10:37:00 AM)

    Some times it's the moment you meet, some times years but it matters not, if it's true love.... Andrew 10 (Report) Reply

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