Falling Tears Poem by Joscelyn Alderdice

Falling Tears

Rating: 5.0


There is nothing you can do,
To stop my tears from falling...
Even when I'm calling...calling...calling...

For something to save me from this hell.
Its like being stuck at the bottom of a well.

There is nothing you can do,
To stop my tears from falling...
Even when I'm calling...calling...calling...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 19 February 2009

I liked your poem, it was fun readin, but i wish it was a little longer, , , , , , , , but apart from that, you can feelin the emotion in this poem, overall i liked it

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