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Family Love Forever - Poem by .Pd. is here

Have u ever thought actually
What it would be like, without a family.

Family is the only one,
Where one experiences best of fun.
Family is an elegant necklace,
Whose bond may appear broken
But deep inside, their hearts are still one.

When the unwanted sorrows seem longer than a mile,
Your dear old family makes you smile.

When because of a mistake no event
Works out for your sake.
When life refuses to mend
There comes a sharp bend,
Family gives necessary amends,
To the family all worries can be sent.

In a fraction of time,
Your sorrows will leave
It may sound absurd
But you’ve got to believe.

Wherever you may be,
You belong to the pack.
And to them you can always go back.


Comments about Family Love Forever by .Pd. is here

  • Rookie Asma Bahrainwala (6/24/2007 12:08:00 PM)

    its a lovely poem, Preets... for all those who realise the importance of family! ! ! ...
    no wonder this one has made it to the top 500 list... well deserved...

    best wishes always,
    Asma... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 23 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (8/28/2006 11:25:00 AM)

    A Young buddy, who was still under her mother's wings, is craving for the shelter under the family protection. Every chick likes its nest. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chandan Roy (8/4/2006 9:59:00 AM)

    I had always loved poems on social and family subjects because the real poets are the ones who can actually handle such complex subjects with ease...... we are just novices as we write more on LOVE, HATE, ROMANCE, and such related subjects... these are the most easy subjects to express in words....

    Preeti.... congratulations, standing applause to the subject well handled.10, of course! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kristin Davis (7/9/2006 2:35:00 AM)

    Preeti... every time I see your name I can't help it but say your name aloud in my head... sounds rather different than what it's actual intent it....'Pretty Dear'....=) Anyways, this piece was very charming and was eloquently written! Thank you for sharing! Truly an enjoyable piece!

    HUGS,
    Kris! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (5/26/2006 12:59:00 PM)

    I love the flow in this one, a loving energy about it, what real family life should be
    Love Duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,550 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/26/2006 1:41:00 AM)

    PREETS...PUMPIN' OUT THE FINEST OF WORK....YA WON'T FORGET ME NOW, WHENCE YOU BECOME A WORLD REKNOWN POET LAYREATE, WILL
    YA? ! GREAT JOB...YOU GOOOOOOOOO YOUNG POETESS! 10! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr. Lubna S. Khan (5/8/2006 3:48:00 AM)

    i liked it! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 19, 2005

Poem Edited: Friday, May 7, 2010


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