Fanning The Universe Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Fanning The Universe

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Winds fanning the universe, tempting fate with the
sweetness of it's breath.

Living fully among heaven and earth, seeing the
natural beauty which falls on everything.

Sailing with the clouds, painting the skies every
brilliant color of blue and touching the rosiness
of sunrise or sunsets with the awe of a child.

Forming shapes in many young minds, filling life
with hopes and dreams, winds continually fanning
the universe, tempting fate and all those who see
or feel, the sweetness of it's breath.

Monday, March 17, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 17 March 2014

I feel the Sun shining here! Love it! !

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Matthias Pantaleon 17 March 2014

Strong metaphor, good selection of words.

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