Jahan zaib

Rookie - 104 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Far Off Neighbor - Poem by Jahan zaib

The world has entered a social age,
But we the two,
Races tribes and religions,
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

The title has its own story. Physically we two countries, Pakistan and India, are neighbors but the people of the two countries have gone away from each other. They should be stopped.

Comments about Far Off Neighbor by Jahan zaib

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (12/10/2012 9:51:00 AM)


    Ah i wish India and Pakistan never be that far....by hands and hearts...different faiths and race not a barrier to be one. Maybe the history a bit hurt from past but for future is the time we will live, so do it better for both and for all countries..we are one, you maybe different as they too but nothing is same, that is how unique for each person, race and nation is...but truly we are in one nation of earth but in different big district call countries...no barriers just love_Soul (Report) Reply

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  • Dr Library @ Debadarshi Dr Library @ Debadarshi (12/8/2012 8:13:00 AM)


    heart touching sir..... well written, keep us motivated with many more wonderful pieces..... (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa Kanav Justa (11/30/2012 4:07:00 AM)


    if everyone could think like you, , , , (Report) Reply

  • Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (11/16/2012 7:13:00 AM)


    Actually blood brothers for thousands of years
    now blood ememies serving a one God of both
    killing each other over the same God sound foolish?
    It is. (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde Yash Shinde (11/6/2012 9:31:00 PM)


    really the partition of india was the greatest abrasion that india faced...............very truthful and powerful write :) (Report) Reply

  • Srijeeta Manna (11/6/2012 7:10:00 AM)


    wonderful thought.i wish every individual thought this way. (Report) Reply

  • Indranil Bhaduri Indranil Bhaduri (11/6/2012 7:02:00 AM)


    Neighbours are meant to help each other, provide support in distress..I wish the two great nations understand the same. We all are human beings made of the same red blood and having a heart inside. Hats off to you sir! (Report) Reply

  • The Reader The Reader (11/5/2012 9:49:00 AM)


    wonderful write with wonderful comments advocating the need for wonderful relations b/w the 2 countries. (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir Saadat Tahir (11/4/2012 4:11:00 PM)


    lovely lines.....mirroring the common destiny of nation neighbors.
    yes...wdnt it...cdnt it....be so much better for the helpless trodden morass of humanity heaped high

    liked....
    sat (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (11/3/2012 8:53:00 AM)


    Teaching in poetry is more freedom than an advice shape..thus i think this is the best method...and you are using it for love to teach love for all by a pen_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Jaya Mishra Jaya Mishra (11/3/2012 8:48:00 AM)


    Dearest neighbour,
    I wish that our entire country listen to this.......

    And teach their children that they deserve to be friends
    Teach them love......

    When I meet people like us often I wonder why are there even problems between us? ? ? You aint against me neither am I against you.... You seek peace I do too..... Why are we then like we are? ? ?

    Anyways...... Your this piece was magical... Loved it.
    Plus the message you wrote for your daughter...... Heart-touching! ! !

    I loved this.....
    Going through this.... I must confess, you've inspired me to write something like this too....
    I sure will represent this side......
    We seek peace....

    Never dropp writing..... You rock! ! !
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (11/3/2012 8:36:00 AM)


    very true indeed, it is actually an evolution, that none would have predicted, wonderful write, very well structured

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