Farewell To Love Poem by micheal udenyi

Farewell To Love

Rating: 5.0


I gave up all i had
just for me to be heard
but lacked the boldness
to fix the bait to the hook

I tried to open up
but all i could like a broken cup
was to see myself shattered in shamble
as though defeated in a rumbe

She loves some one else
for so i was told or else
i would have been gone
but my love sticks like gum

Fare well to love
good bye my love
as i leave you like a friend
to meet at last like strangers

Why is love so cruel
to have tortured the heart once loved
she may not have noticed
but a murderer having mudered

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 10 January 2009

a beautiful write that tells the tale of vagaries young hearts have to face in love life...frank and expressive lines well meant nicely framed...10

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Cynthia Onukwugha 05 January 2009

wow the last stanza really struck me this poem definitely deserves a 10 and don't give up on love! there is someone out there for you

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