Treasure Island

renu kakkar


it was not in my fate (kismet)
that my life partner would be with me
on the difficult terrains of life
he would walk besides me
it was not in my kismet....

the promises made to me
you have forgotten
those made before the marriage fire
you have also forgotten
it was not in my kismet.....

away from my world
you have gone
on the path of life
you have left me alone
it was not in my kismet......

i will face every difficulty
if necessary alone
so what if you are not beside me
memories alongside me will not make me alone
it was not in my kismet.......

though in this life our companionship has broken
in the next life i will not let it happen
if need be i will like savitri
fight with yamraj (god of death) to get you even
it was not in my kismet..........

renukakkar 17nov,2010

Submitted: Thursday, September 29, 2011
Edited: Saturday, October 01, 2011

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (10/2/2011 5:14:00 PM)

    telling this is very easy...achieving is a myth...savitri is a story told to influence the good morale of bad women reigning the society..i appreciate the had its stroke on your fate..for me it made me rock hard does not matter if change comes for good or for bad so that i am able to reign..nice write and i like the style of copyrighting the poem-accountancy style-do read mine-A Lemon.Somewhat like yours. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (9/30/2011 3:23:00 PM)

    joy disowns from heart as love departs
    vale of tunes draws black curtain of sorrow, quite poignant, heart breaking, may God bless you,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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