Fidelis Patronus


Father? Poem by Fidelis Patronus


We are born as sinners
Yet every child is innocent in God's eyes
So that every child goes to heaven
But those of us who are older,
Are we children?
We are named Children of God…
Do we get to go to heaven?
Father?

Submitted: Wednesday, December 8, 2004

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  • Rookie Fidelis Patronus (10/23/2006 12:57:00 PM)

    I'm back! ! ! My name was hellp because my mother found my poems and back tehn i had poems that were alot more intense. about suicide, religion, and sex. My mom banned me from the site and made me delet all my poems. (my mom and family r VERY strong christians) i changed my name and deleted only some of my poems. My name was hellp cuz i felt like i was in hell and i REALLY needed help. i was so scared. I'v never been on the website for years and then i got an email today that sed i hada comment on one of my poems...i read all of the commments i missed and it totally inspired me to continue my poetry. I changed my name and i will try 2 pick up where i left off...i havn't written poetry since i got caught...thankyou so much for ur support (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mechelle Schloss (9/21/2005 10:58:00 AM)

    Beautiful. I hear you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pradeep Dhavakumar (12/9/2004 8:33:00 AM)

    Good question.Another question where there is no answer. (Report) Reply

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