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these tears of joy,
are for the first time that i saw you
my beatiful baby boy,
i never thought this love i would find,
for what i feel for you is so deep inside,
when i see your face i see mine,
when i look into your eyes i can see the sun shine,
no matter how hard times may get,
just remember that im here for you dont ever forget,
for you are my hart my strenght my all,
when ever you need me just give me a call,
for i will always be here for you until the end,
because im more than just a father im also your friend.

Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

dedicated to my son: nicholas anthony murguia i love u always!

Submitted: Thursday, January 1, 2009
Edited: Saturday, February 21, 2009

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Comments about this poem (FATHER TO A SON. by JOSE MURGUIA )

  • Rookie - 64 Points Rafique Farooqi (10/14/2009 7:09:00 AM)

    A beautifully written poem about love for son.....thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,190 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2009 8:47:00 PM)

    when ever you need me just give me a call,
    for i will always be here for you until the end,
    because im more than just a father im also your friend....this is how father should treat a child when attains the age of maturity.. lovley father and fatherly advice we must seek and adhere to.... fine 10

    read do u know...papa you too(reference for your poem) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anand Madhukar (9/20/2009 6:29:00 AM)

    You are surely going to be a dad of whom your son will be forever proud... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (9/19/2009 10:38:00 AM)

    what alovely father
    nice piece,
    you son is lucky to have u, as i am
    cool man for a beutiful poem
    luwi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Claude H Oliver Ii (9/9/2009 1:46:00 PM)

    We find out who we really are when we see our reflection in someone we love deeply. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie syaz wafea (8/25/2009 2:58:00 AM)

    it is so meaningful..i bet this is how every father in the world feels..ur son is lucky to have u~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christina Phan (8/19/2009 12:07:00 AM)

    great title and ur son is proud to have dad like you
    Wonderful job (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amy Ormonde (6/3/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I like it. It has a great scheme and I love how the father feels towards his son, it's very heartfelt. You should make it longer I think you have a winning poem on your hands if you add to it a little more. Other then that your a great poet I love It! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie DELETED NOW (3/2/2009 11:14:00 AM)

    my daddy is always saying that...
    yea that's right I teared up
    I like this line...
    when i look into your eyes i can see the sun shine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie No Noo (2/1/2009 6:34:00 AM)

    good poem it rhymes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Seraphine Belle (1/30/2009 4:06:00 AM)

    I see how your family moulds your work, they are your inspiration and life. For that, there is no word to describe this, it is just simply a work from the heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Glenn Mark Amor (1/22/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    Sweet poem... a nice tribute. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maxislam Beauty (1/15/2009 5:01:00 AM)

    very fine piece on Fatherly love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie MuRdA RhEE (1/13/2009 2:34:00 PM)

    Beautiful.... jose
    simply beautiful** lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Little Mo (1/13/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    Beautiful sentiments, well written straight from the heart.
    Mo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Genesis Learny (1/11/2009 10:06:00 PM)

    this is one of the most passionate poems jose has ever written. i love it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (1/11/2009 6:36:00 AM)

    Another soulful tribute. Things that fathers don't often say. More of this is needed.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sweet poison (1/10/2009 10:49:00 PM)

    aww this is soo sweet. ur a great father. love this one. definetely a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The Long Lost Dreamer of Dreams (1/9/2009 2:21:00 PM)

    when i read this an image popped in my head of a mother father and son the day of his birth and so much pride and joy in their hearts...... amazing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Seema(Aanamika) 80 (1/8/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    it was a great poem, words are beautifully expressed (Report) Reply

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