Treasure Island

JOSE MURGUIA

(4/14/80 / aztlan CITY OF ANGELZ! (EL MONTE))

FATHER TO A SON.


these tears of joy,
are for the first time that i saw you
my beatiful baby boy,
i never thought this love i would find,
for what i feel for you is so deep inside,
when i see your face i see mine,
when i look into your eyes i can see the sun shine,
no matter how hard times may get,
just remember that im here for you dont ever forget,
for you are my hart my strenght my all,
when ever you need me just give me a call,
for i will always be here for you until the end,
because im more than just a father im also your friend.



Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

dedicated to my son: nicholas anthony murguia i love u always!

Submitted: Thursday, January 01, 2009
Edited: Saturday, February 21, 2009

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2009 8:47:00 PM)

    when ever you need me just give me a call,
    for i will always be here for you until the end,
    because im more than just a father im also your friend....this is how father should treat a child when attains the age of maturity.. lovley father and fatherly advice we must seek and adhere to.... fine 10

    read mine...smiley...kids....son...papa do u know...papa you too(reference for your poem) (Report) Reply

  • Luwi Habte (9/19/2009 10:38:00 AM)

    what alovely father
    nice piece,
    you son is lucky to have u, as i am
    cool man for a beutiful poem
    luwi (Report) Reply

  • syaz wafea (8/25/2009 2:58:00 AM)

    it is so meaningful..i bet this is how every father in the world feels..ur son is lucky to have u~ (Report) Reply

  • Amy Ormonde (6/3/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    I like it. It has a great scheme and I love how the father feels towards his son, it's very heartfelt. You should make it longer I think you have a winning poem on your hands if you add to it a little more. Other then that your a great poet I love It! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • DELETED NOW (3/2/2009 11:14:00 AM)

    omigosh!
    my daddy is always saying that...
    yea that's right I teared up
    I like this line...
    when i look into your eyes i can see the sun shine (Report) Reply

  • Seraphine Belle (1/30/2009 4:06:00 AM)

    I see how your family moulds your work, they are your inspiration and life. For that, there is no word to describe this, it is just simply a work from the heart (Report) Reply

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