Favourite Poem by Beth Dodgson

Favourite

Rating: 5.0


Favourite child 1,2,3 but yet am ignored
You love and care for them more then me
You leave me alone to cry

I am standing next to you
But you don't care about me
You only care about child 1,2 and 3

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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