Jayne Davies

Rookie - 148 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

Fear And Reality Poem by Jayne Davies


I always knew the time would come,
To face it all again,
I always knew deep in my heart,
That fate would call your name.
Can't bear to see you go away,
Forever on my mind,
Praying for your safe return,
This war is so unkind!
If only I could turn back time,
To when you were a child,
Escape this dark reality,
My fears are running wild!
I'll think of you each moment,
Until your work is done,
I'll be forever by your side,
Come home safe my Son x

Submitted: Thursday, June 06, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 01, 2013

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  • Rookie - 148 Points Jayne Davies (6/24/2013 1:05:00 AM)

    Thank you both, I'm so pleased with your kind comments! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,354 Points Patricia Grantham (6/22/2013 5:22:00 PM)

    We are never at rest until we see our loved
    faces again. Freedom comes at a price and
    we all must sometimes pay. This touched my
    heart. A passionate write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Divya Gupta (6/6/2013 2:57:00 AM)

    Very heart touching poem..highly appreciated it sir..
    It shows the utmost love, care and worridness for the dear one..
    Plz do read my poem.. M new and need your suggestions: -) .. Thanx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 148 Points Jayne Davies (6/6/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Kavya x your kind words mean a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 692 Points Kavya . (6/6/2013 1:24:00 AM)

    such a nice poem.....v emotional and deeply moved by each and every line! very well written! v true that the fears run wild until we have our loved ones in our arms.........the mind starts wandering to places it should not, as we fear losing our loved one! (Report) Reply

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