Fearless Equestrienne Poem by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

Fearless Equestrienne

Rating: 5.0


his iron shield won't stand my sword
it's honor for me and it's pleasure for you
to take me where my funeral will be done
do my losses prove my love for you?

don't be afraid to be alone and lost
all you can do just follow your feet
to a knight who has nothing to lose
one red rose isn't what they want from me

I will be the one who can kill that noble knight
I will be your fearless knight
you will depend on me to finish him off
I will make his deathbed fine

the history will remember me,
I killed these nobel rights
I burned all of its victories
I did the greatest sin

yes we sailed the Mediterranean for pleasure
we saw everything you can imagine together
our sails were colored like my forbidden castles
and our ship was faster than the sharpest feather

just be the one who can kill my fictive tragedienne
just be my fearless equestrienne
I will depend on you to finish her off
you will make her deathbed fine

I will be the one who can kill that aimlessness
and you will be my enchantress
whom I will depend on, to make it start off
she will make my deathbed fine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 October 2009

his iron shield won't stand my sword it's honor for me and it's pleasure for you to take me where my funeral will be done do my losses prove my love for you? .if it helps to remove misgivings and prove real feelings thenmany would have done it...it does not workkk but honestly speaking it matters moer if we prove worth to it rather than offer funeral....lovely n great write....10 watched helplessly....come hjome..no separate ways...

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Catrina Heart 20 September 2009

Stunning imagery and well formed verses...........great diction and imagery..10/10

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