hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 33,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Feel Fit - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Neither the dreams alone may work
Nor the hollow words
It may need dedication
Along with strong indication

No task is unachievable
Only you need to struggle
Work hard and realize
Fancy ideas must cease

Go with for practical approach
It may help as such
It shall take you to high peak
It may not push you to feel weak

Remain within limit
And feel fit
You can achieve
In what you believe

As human beings
You have to sing
To favorable tunes
And obtain fortune


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  • Gold Star - 33,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 2:34:00 AM)

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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 33,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 12:37:00 AM)

    Neither the dreams alone may work
    Nor the hollow words (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, July 21, 2014


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