Feel For Right Moment Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feel For Right Moment

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Let me think over
About providing cover
So you feel complete shelter
From the day here after

I must hand over
My soul from inner chamber
That has longed enough
For smile and last laugh

I shall love to be in your arm
And expect no harm
That you will remain cool
As bright as moon

Sun does not move from position
But I love this composition
You take me over completely
I shall submit readily

Body attraction may be pushed away
We will find heaven anyway
You shall adore my kingdom
I shall miss you seldom

I shall sink my pride
Falsehood o hide
And come open in favor
For your honor

Just lean over more
To come near
Meet the eyes in agreement
And feel for right moment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

Very Good Linny Will2 minutes ago Another Very Good Write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

good work. Sangram ParidaLess than a minute ago nice poem. Comment +1 Your heart is shown

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

Dino ZitoLess than a minute ago Your heart is clearly in it Mr. Mehta, keep it up Comment +1 Relatable

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

Shayna Elaine1 minute ago Very relatable and well written.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 October 2013

Let me think over About providing cover

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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