Feel Great Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Feel Great

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You have chosen to be sad
But I always came to you and fed
The obligation through dream
When you wanted to rise and swim

You are nice personality
With good smile on face as best quality
You look positive and think too
I have always found you true

I hold you in high esteem and feel great
Even though I came very late
In your life to enjoy the moment
I took it as heavenly sent

I had to be away for some reasons
But that should not label me as bad person
You are complete even without my presence
Love has its message with essence

I heal your feeling with gentle touch
The power behind love is as such
It makes you to smile even in distress
That is reflected and clearly seen on face

It makes no difference
When I fail to take full chance
To sail you through air medium
When you keep silent and mum

I love being with you
Even though with no contact through
You are always on my side to inspire
I am always at ease with you and not on fire

So chose the way you like
Remain sad and dislike
Everything that is around you
It must be called reasonably untrue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

Ayesha Nigam Never seen, never touched, just felt with the heart! That makes it the most beautiful thing in the world. A love that sets u free! Very tender! a few seconds ago via mobile · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

Sabeen Rashid and Khushi Raaj Bhatiya like this. Sabeen Rashid Miles apart, but always an anchor, no matter what, ever faithful, ever true......the love that you share, forever real! Beautiful! ! ! about an hour ago via mobile · Like

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Gajanan Mishra 13 December 2012

Everything that is around you. good poem. I like it. Thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 December 2012

You have chosen to be sad But I always came to you and fed The obligation through dream When you wanted to rise and swim

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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