Feel It Fine Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Feel It Fine
I am willing to go that extra mile
If you offer little smile
I have waited a long
For your happiness if I am not wrong
What else I need than your shine?
Is that look not so divine
I find some traces of nature
Assuring me of bright future
Those teeth offer wonderful show
When you prefer smile with blow
It bursts into all kinds of pleasure
I think it is best available treasure
“I love you “means nothing
But it has hidden something
Heart’s close breathing
And happiness forthcoming
All I need is your care
So I simply dare’
Put forward my proposal
Have consideration for disposal
It is message from pure and honest person
It have no compelling reasons
You are at liberty to decline
I shall still feel it fine
Jeff Sanftleben19 minutes ago Good message but I think you're forcing a rhyme every line.
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its good IFUNANYA ADAEZE OKOLI15 minutes ago The message is clear yet the poem is not so plain. I like it on the over alll but you still need to work on the flow and synergy of the words. Comment +1 nice
Barbara Stump19 minutes ago I like it Comment +1 Too rhyme driven
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I am willing to go that extra mile If you offer little smile