Feeling Poem by Basma Amir

Feeling

Rating: 4.5


Feeling sad, unhappy, and lonely
Feeling so bored cause i set only
Feeling afraid from the world decide to destroy me
Feeling nervously and so more

Wanting to leave these feelings
Believing or not believing
I ran away from this world and screaming
With a high, loud noice saying
' I hate these feelings '
I turned as good as normal for only few days
and then the world knock me down again
this time it's hard to reach the world
and again Feeling sad, unhappy, and lonely

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sayeed Abubakar 15 March 2012

Why do you feel so sad at this tender age, dear poetess?

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Basma Amir 24 March 2012

Thanks for voting! ! ! !

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Basma Amir 24 March 2012

Thanks Ahmed! ! ! no i don't feel it at all

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 24 March 2012

nice poem..how this sad feeling comes to you and you are at the age of flowers blossoming

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Louise Crielly 22 March 2012

i really enjoyed reading this i know how it feels

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Basma Amir 22 March 2012

No, i don't feel sad atall but this was my 1st poem i wrote, & I and my friends chose a topic which is sad

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