Feeling Divine Poem by prashant shaurya

Feeling Divine

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I break at times
and sing the rhymes
rhymes that raise
feelings divine....

At times when sad
and in tears clad
clad with the grief
i scribe the pad...

Then i get cheers
to pen my tears
tears that reflect
my joys and fears....

In grief or relief
in trauma or bliss
bliss of poetry
is all I wish...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 20 April 2010

Well express good write

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Jerry Hughes 20 April 2010

...nice trio of poems Preshant, well done, cheers, Jerry

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i like the form! i live for new ones... i like this poem

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Ritty Patnaik 21 April 2010

dear prashant......feeling divine is in away feeling the divinity in you.this poem is sad with vision full of optimism.there is always a silver lining.well done! . ritty

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Ritty Patnaik 21 April 2010

dear prashant......feeling divine is in away feeling the divinity in you.this poem is sad with vision full of optimism.there is always a silver lining.well done! . ritty

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R. H. Peat 05 July 2010

Interesting poem Prashant. Writing poetry is a way to expand the self. a poet friend RH Peat

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John Knight 30 April 2010

Hi Prashant - Love the poem - thanks for sharing. Poetry can releasethe Divine in us ans when we are feeling low the 'Bliss of Poetry' lifts us on to higher ground. Yurs through Poetry - JOHN

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Chitra - 23 April 2010

Feeling divine symoblizes spiritual catharsis...profound...and hopeful in tone!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 April 2010

yet sorrow needs a way for redemption grief when heaves heart ingraining in pain songs from deep of core engraves with creases rhythm of stance unleashes guilt as when told, beautiful write with ingenuity, yet of unique genre by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Maria Shipka 22 April 2010

Yes I agree with comment of my friend Hasmukh :) Sharing the bliss of poems is also what I wish....long time I not heard about you Prashant...only write, continuete! There is lot of you can tell and I'm looking forward on all you will write :) Maria

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