Feeling Lost Poem by Patrícia Salomé

Feeling Lost

Rating: 5.0


Can I write about passion
Without anyone to love?
Can I realize the dimension
Of my unhappy solitude?

Yes. One thousand times, Yes.

In my life there are only shadows
Showing me nothing but sorrow
I must fight against this torment
And everything will be better - tomorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Milica Franchi De Luri 12 August 2009

Hi Patricia! you write beautiful poems, and your life is just beginning, you have the world at your feet, don't let failed romance to stand in the way of your prosperous future, which will bring you love and all you desire, just one thing.....be aware of old wulfs dressed in a sheep's skin that will flatter you until...........

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Patrick A. Martin 12 August 2009

Ahh1 Patricia because you write life is already so much better. Are you a beautiful flower in the garden of God's love? - YES a thousand times YES.

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