Feeling Strange Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Feeling Strange

Rating: 5.0


I feel for no reason
I'm a strange person
I keep away from exercise
Coming up with every excuse.

I take the stairs
Not the elevator
I seem to think
Maybe that's enough.

I've a lot of unanswered
Questions in my mind
I'm focused and constantly
Searching for answers.

But I'm quiet always
Never asking a question
I keep things to myself
That's what others think.

I keep moving steadily
Like a nuclear particle
With over half life gone
Traveling the other half.

Where will the destiny
Take me? I know not
This life I enjoyed
Let it go this way.

Sunday, April 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 05 December 2022

As per my intuition, you are leading a simple and peaceful life. It's better to manually switch on and off the TV instead of using a remote controller so far as physical exercise is concerned.

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Ramesh Rai 04 May 2014

Since childhood i have a hypothesis since i was the student of science and fan of Newton. this is - Every particle of nature is in moving state and its velocity is inversely proportion to the mass of the body. Thanks and Regards.

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Valsa George 29 April 2014

If you climb the stairs and do not take the elevator... that itself is a good exercise and you don't have to regret that you keep away from exercise...! If you are happy in life with what you are and what you have, why feel that you are strange?

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