Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 137 Points (9 may / India)

.feeling Tired..: ( - Poem by Rigzin Namgyal

feeling so tired what should I do
feeling so dull what should I do
O God! ! ! what punishment I deserved from thee
this exam is killing me
how I come out of these books..so vast as the sea
what do I do..that you have taken everything that made me glee

on the top of that it is so hot..its killing the very me
this heat stings me like the sting of a bee
I wana be me..very me
Oh God! ! ! ..don't burden me with all the trauma..you gifted me

it is the days ahead after the exams that I wan't to see
the very thought of that fills in me...a sense of me
I go joy to think where I will be

its my home...my Ladakh! ! ! ..where else would I be
its the nature's lap which seems like calling me
feeling drained in this place where I am forced to be
its Ladakh..my home where I want to be: (

Topic(s) of this poem: homesickness, musing

Comments about .feeling Tired..: ( by Rigzin Namgyal

  • Rookie - 0 Points Theany Ouy (5/13/2014 11:55:00 PM)

    Nicely put together with a lovely flow of smooth rhythm. I like your style. Lovely piece. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Reginia Dawson (4/9/2014 4:41:00 PM)

    Having faith is what this poem is about. Sometime you are tired but when you call on God, you gain stregnth to finish (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,737 Points Patricia Grantham (2/11/2013 8:19:00 AM)

    I never did like to take a test, it is the only way to succeed in life Appreciated (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (9/22/2012 5:41:00 AM)

    Yes, don't get tired of study and exam. All the best. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (12/29/2011 4:23:00 AM)

    The writing exam blues... Just study and do your best and don't panic. Good luck with your studies... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 3, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 2, 2015

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