Rigzin Namgyal

Rookie - 10 Points (9 may / India)

.. Feeling Tired..: (


..feeling so tired what should i do..
..feeling so dull what should i do..
.o God! ! what punishment i deserved from thee...
..this exams is killing me..
..how i come out of these books so vast as the sea..
..what do i do..that you have taken everything that made me glee..

..on the top of that its so hot..its killing the very me...
...this heat stings me like the sting of a bee...
..i wana be me..very me...
..Oh God! ! ! ! ..don't burden me with all the trauma..you gifted me...

..it is the days ahead after the exams that i wan't to see....
..the very thought of that fills in me...a sense of me....
..i go joy to think where i will be....

..its my home...my Ladakh! ! ! ..where else would i be....
..its the nature's lap which seems like calling me...
..feeling drained in this place where i am forced to be...
..its Ladakh, my home where i want to be..: (

Submitted: Monday, October 03, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, September 03, 2013

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Comments about this poem (.. Feeling Tired..: ( by Rigzin Namgyal )

  • Rookie - 0 Points Theany Ouy (5/13/2014 11:55:00 PM)

    Nicely put together with a lovely flow of smooth rhythm. I like your style. Lovely piece. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reginia Dawson (4/9/2014 4:41:00 PM)

    Having faith is what this poem is about. Sometime you are tired but when you call on God, you gain stregnth to finish (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,354 Points Patricia Grantham (2/11/2013 8:19:00 AM)

    I never did like to take a test, it is the only way to succeed in life Appreciated (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Neela Nath (9/22/2012 5:41:00 AM)

    Yes, don't get tired of study and exam. All the best. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (12/29/2011 4:23:00 AM)

    The writing exam blues... Just study and do your best and don't panic. Good luck with your studies... (Report) Reply

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