Feelings We Are Afraid To Show Poem by Shamba Kaunda

Feelings We Are Afraid To Show

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Its the pain you never know that hurts your soul,
Or the burden you invisibly bear that torments your spirit,
Dont keep hatred in you saying you don't want war,
When you know deep down your heart you can feel it,
Its the trap you ignore that makes you fall,
Or the small problems you tend not to show that extinguishes your glow,
Dont keep grudges in your heart saying you don't want a fight,
Though yet you know its a burden you cant carry through the night,
Its the feelings you are scared to show that keeps your e
mbers low,
Or the unexpressed words inside your chest might make you vex more,
Dont pretend you dont want to be vile when you know the fury is going to last for a while.

Fights we always thought but never fought hinders us from buying the freedom we would have bought,
And the tears we are ashamed to cry floods our psyches and drowns our hearts.

Wednesday, October 26, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paige Gallagher 26 October 2011

This is really good! you should be very proud :)

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Bonnie Lundgren 25 November 2013

Could be better; needs work on the English. The idea is not quite clear, but I think you have chosen a true feeling to write about. I would recommend that you revise the poem with the help of someone who can ask you questions about what you are trying to say and correct your English grammar

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Lusekelo Simwela 27 November 2012

nice poem axsce...the best one i have read from.u so far

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Crimson Love 09 November 2011

This is an exceptional poem, every word used was phenomenal, perfect poem. :)

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Shamba Kaunda 01 November 2011

Thank you guys. I really i appreciate.

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Eric Cockrell 29 October 2011

very good thinking! wisdom beyond your years! good job!

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