Final Days Poem by Kevin Fisher

Final Days

Rating: 4.8


Fatal wounds of a worthless war
Inside my body the organs ache
Numb on the inside and out
All the bombs and bullets going off at once
Laying in a pool of blood and tears
Dieing isn't so bad at leasts theres no more fears
Acheing pain its never ending
Your war has taken another victim
So tell me what this war is really for.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 27 May 2009

''Laying in a pool of blood and tears Dieing isn't so bad at leasts theres no more fears'' a good visual metaphor(.................) .10+

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Private Girl 11 April 2009

woah, your pretty good i like the way its short, its amazing xx

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Honest Heart 08 April 2009

WOW! ! ! .........Great Poem...It is full of pain....keeeeeeeep writing :) :) :)

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Madison Yeater 30 March 2009

this line says all... Dieing isn't so bad at leasts theres nomore fears i like this. its short, and very understandable of the pain that is behind it. GREAT JOB!

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