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Final Door.......

Brown house
Grey smiles
Green green grass
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  • Valsa George (9/29/2012 12:05:00 AM)

    Scattered images knit together in a thread which can be interpreted in more than one way! An allusive poem, I suppose!

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  • Knight Fizzstorm (8/27/2012 12:22:00 PM)

    Horse and carriage poems are the best kind.
    Funeral/weddings, endings/beginnings.
    Commendable poem.

  • Hamid Negah (8/25/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    Reading your poetry gives vitality.

  • Valerie Dohren (8/24/2012 10:20:00 AM)

    Beautiful but very sad write, yet quite lovely and well expressed.

  • Danny Draper (8/23/2012 6:18:00 AM)

    If it wasn't for the white carriage this could easily be the images and symbols for a funeral and not a wedding. The repetition and humor were very characteristic of a wedding - tension and humor. The use of colour and monochrome tones in fabrics and flowers and language was succinct almost cautious like a shy bride not used to being the center of attention. Great ending a farewell and a new door opens with expectation. well done, good poem.

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