karen sinclair

Rookie - 184 Points (brighton)

Final Door....... - Poem by karen sinclair

Brown house
Grey smiles
Green green grass
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Comments about Final Door....... by karen sinclair

  • Gold Star - 36,885 Points Valsa George (9/29/2012 12:05:00 AM)

    Scattered images knit together in a thread which can be interpreted in more than one way! An allusive poem, I suppose! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Knight Fizzstorm (8/27/2012 12:22:00 PM)

    Horse and carriage poems are the best kind.
    Funeral/weddings, endings/beginnings.
    Commendable poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Hamid Negah (8/25/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    Reading your poetry gives vitality. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,413 Points Valerie Dohren (8/24/2012 10:20:00 AM)

    Beautiful but very sad write, yet quite lovely and well expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (8/23/2012 6:18:00 AM)

    If it wasn't for the white carriage this could easily be the images and symbols for a funeral and not a wedding. The repetition and humor were very characteristic of a wedding - tension and humor. The use of colour and monochrome tones in fabrics and flowers and language was succinct almost cautious like a shy bride not used to being the center of attention. Great ending a farewell and a new door opens with expectation. well done, good poem. (Report) Reply

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