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(13 January 1947 / Southport)

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Final Song

Hush my love, don’t fret and fuss -
now there’s just the two of us.

We’ll dream together, here below
the darkened sky,
the moon’s soft glow,

as we recall the time, now passed,
before there was a shadow cast
upon the world that once we knew,
when all was well for me and you.

Let’s gaze into the mirror long,
to see ourselves, both sure and strong -
there’s naught to fear, there’s nothing wrong -

and we will sing our final song.

Submitted: Thursday, June 27, 2013
Edited: Sunday, June 30, 2013

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  • Diane Hine (7/25/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    A comforting and companionable duet.

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  • Patricia Grantham (7/24/2013 9:51:00 AM)

    A final song but not a final love! The singing of a beautiful love song ads
    fuel to the fire that is already burning with love notes. The fire of love is not
    easily extinguished by words nor by songs. A beautiful write again Val.

  • Unwritten Soul (7/15/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    Hope not a final song because this is so good....should make an album :) haha_Soul

  • Elena Sandu (7/10/2013 6:34:00 PM)

    Your wonderful poem made me wonder: Must we have said a farewell, to have the precious flower of eternal love? Thank you for share dear Valerie, another poem of yours to love!

  • Kelvin Owusu (7/10/2013 3:50:00 AM)

    such a Beautiful piece could you play this on an acoustic? nicely penned

  • Vipins Puthooran (7/9/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    to sing the final song together/ a romantic poem/well-express'd! ! ! !

  • Thomas A Robinson (7/4/2013 3:25:00 PM)

    The final song is one of freedom releasing the love in each of the others heart.

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (7/3/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    An emotional romantic poem that is touching! Enjoyed, Valerie!

  • Heather Wilkins (7/2/2013 12:57:00 PM)

    a good read. nice romantic poem

  • Meena Mustafa (7/2/2013 9:17:00 AM)

    Such a lovely poem. Full of emotions. Great penning Val.

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