Finding A Better Way Poem by louis rams

Finding A Better Way

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So many disappointments that I have from day to day
If I could make a change - I'd find a better way.
I would have made my dreams -long before my teens
Then I would have known what to do
And I would follow through.

But my dreams came in my older years
And that is when you have doubts and fears.
They say with age you build confidence.
That is not always true.
As you get older you don't know what to do.

This is the age of computers - and technology
Is reaching heights
You don't know who to turn to
Or how to even fight.

I know that education is so much more advanced
So put your mind to it
You may not get another chance.

Set that goal in your mind
Don't let that dream fall behind
Don't stop yourself before you've even begun
You can do it - you're the only one.

Visualize that dream in your mind
Then it won't be so hard to find.
Like a baby - you must first learn to crawl
Then walk, then run, and you will see
That it will come.

So many dreams have been left
On the wayside road of life
That when they recall
They have to struggle and fight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 06 August 2012

Another gem of poetry. Great message. I agree with you so much. Far too many teens give up their ideals under pressure of adults who have failed to achieve their own ideals and who have started to call idealism naivity. Idelas are not naive and each of us should keep the child as much in us alive as to keep to believe we can make a positive change in our world. Even we make only a small change in our small world of few family members and friends, it will be enough to count. Of course if we can do more, better. I think writing inspiring poems like this, Louis, is also making a positive change in the world. Great poetry, man, that will last into eternity.

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