Some Girl

Rookie - 241 Points (May 05)

Finding Love - Poem by Some Girl

love and friendship
go hand in hand
or will it take a wish
to make me understand

falling in love is easy
but staying there is hard
for if you are unsure
it can fall apart

its not tying a knot
but like tying a bow
if friendship is right
then the love will follow

both stay throughout the years
they have to be strong
for if they are not
then you will know you don't belong

Comments about Finding Love by Some Girl

  • Gold Star - 12,208 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/3/2014 1:08:00 AM)

    This is so simple, and so beautiful! A natural expression of thoughts on love and friendship.
    The second stanza is indeed the best. The last line, which usually is, the icing on the cake. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Diwakar Bhatt (7/9/2011 7:34:00 AM)

    simple....but very impressive. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/24/2008 6:07:00 PM)

    love is great.........i loved this piece....beautiful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 11, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 25, 2011

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