Fire And Movement Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Fire And Movement

Rating: 5.0


I know sweet heart your arms of beauty,
I know sweet heart your charms of beauty,
You moved with all the forms of beauty,
You attacked my heart with storms of beauty.

I remember your art how you captured my heart,
I remember your eyes that injured my heart,
I remember your lips that tortured my heart,
I remember your cheeks that procured my heart,
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On the borders of emotions you fired from eyes,
Your silky hairs were missiles from skies,
With the roses of cheeks ignoring my cries,
With the ropes of love and knots and ties!

In the cover of this fire pinning down my brain,
Killing troops of wisdom and my refrain,
Like Cleopatra captured, no blood no stain,
You came dancing in the tyrant terrain.

You shattered all lines of defense I had,
Paralyzed the guns of offense I had,
I couldn't withdraw, with the pence I had,
I forgot all whence and thence I had.

Keeping climax of love in reserve you marched,
The dressing of my soul you nicely starched
Hot iron of your hands gave a shining award,
My soul was unmoved and a victim of retard.

No ally came for the rescue and helpless I was,
My wisdom shown his back thoughtless I was,
Deaf and dumb, blind in love, harmless I was,
Unconditional surrender, cause arm-less I was.

You are ruling my heart, about five decades!
Mutiny of my soul although still in the shades,
Go ahead, are the signals with divine upgrades,
Independence from you, and the worldly trades!

(In the terminology of battles Fire and Movement is a tactics to capture the enemy's post. Troops are divided in three sections. One is kept reserved to meet any sudden failure. One of the sections opens fire to pin down the enemy and the second section marches forward settles at a suitable place and opens fire. In cover of this fire first section marches and is settled at another suitable place and opens fire. Now the second section attacks from the rear of enemy for the final dog fight.)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Remaining engaged in worldly trades at last the trader starts preparations for the ultimate divine trade.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 19 October 2014

As per the note below the poem..Creating wildness to be wild, that's - fire and Move..well composed thank you

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Valsa George 20 October 2014

Amazing write with wonderful rhythm and alliteration! So you are held a life long prisoner in her bewitching love! I believe there is a heavenly charm in this captivity and you don't want to break yourself free! Kudos! A sure 10

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Ramesh Rai 20 October 2014

ou are ruling my heart, about five decades! Mutiny of my soul although still in the shades, Go ahead, are the signals with divine upgrades, Independence from you, and the worldly trades! I pray the Almighty for completion century. Regards

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Khalid Saifullah 04 March 2015

An amazing poem........................10

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Ramesh Rai 22 October 2014

Effulgent and beautiful soothing write. Thanks for share.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 October 2014

Beautiful poem. You have captured all the amazing beauty in your romantic lines.... Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Salini Nair 21 October 2014

No ally came for the rescue and helpless I was, My wisdom shown his back thoughtless I was, Deaf and dumb, blind in love, harmless I was, Unconditional surrender, cause arm-less I was.................magic of love.....nice sir

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Amitava Sur 20 October 2014

A lovely description of wideness and vastness of love from your sweet heart with which you are overwhelmed with joy and peace. Be happy, be joyous and always remain immersed and dipped in it..... loved it

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