Fire Cracker (A Senryu) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Fire Cracker (A Senryu)

Rating: 5.0


A bright fire cracker
Sped across the skies leaving
Trails of coloured stars

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 23 October 2009

you have captured the beauty of the moment in words. i can see, hear and revel in the sight. love it Mamta

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Kesav Easwaran 20 October 2009

imagination on fire...thanks...

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Patti Masterman 19 October 2009

Fireworks seem to be an imitation of the splendor of the heavens (one that everyone seems to love every much too) .

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Alf Hutchison 19 October 2009

Delightful Sandra fond Regards Alf

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 October 2009

a spectacular sight the last two days...a beautiful senryu

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