Mark R Slaughter


Fire Ferocious - Poem by Mark R Slaughter

Fire! Fire! Ferocious fire!
You restless wall of flame.
Fire! Fire! Roaring higher!
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Comments about Fire Ferocious by Mark R Slaughter

  • Rookie Michelle King (6/29/2014 11:16:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem (Report) Reply

    2 person liked.
    1 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 140 Points Ruby Honeytip (12/3/2012 9:35:00 AM)

    This is a great poem....harrowing subject. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie S... Che (3/13/2009 7:01:00 AM)

    Great poem. I know people who where actucally affected by the fire. thank you for the poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shoshana Green (3/2/2009 3:30:00 PM)

    Great expression for our brothers, sisters, and beloved land helplessly down under neath inferno's consummation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Stacey Watts (3/2/2009 2:35:00 PM)

    Brilliantly written. Great imagery in this piece. 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pablo Cruise (3/2/2009 2:33:00 PM)

    Another good one. I like the flow of your verse. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 76 Points Victor Sklyarov (3/2/2009 2:31:00 PM)

    Great song. Did you compose music too? 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (3/1/2009 4:06:00 AM)

    fire fire ferocious fire
    yes so much fire all around--
    but not a droppppppppp
    of water to drown those flames
    (I also heard there was a paucity of water-
    though we have plenty here at Perth)
    a beautiful poem dear Mark
    thanks for sharing
    i liked it
    -10 anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Anita Wisniewska (3/1/2009 3:55:00 AM)

    Yes good u should send over to Oz (Report) Reply








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