Fire & Ice Poem by emoly core

Fire & Ice

Rating: 5.0


Fire burns anything it touches.
Ice makes it cold as stone.
Fire longs to touch the heavens,
Ice as the same.
To be in gods loving grace.
But that is just a wish.
So intill our wish comes true
We still have each other.
Till death do us part.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Feipeng Shang 23 October 2017

Nice to see intill can be used. ;)

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Emily Core 18 June 2009

yes robert frost is some what were it came from i love his fire and ice i know it by heart

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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2009

fire/ice contradiction plus the message 'let's part' take the poem to an artistic level...good write, Emoly...i liked the imaginative skill your poem carries inside...10

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Alexandrea Tamayo 06 May 2009

I though of Fire and Ice by Robert Frost as well but this is different and you made it your own. I really injoyed it

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 23 April 2009

This poem is similar to Robert Frost poem entitle 'fire and ice' too yet u have a different meaning of it but still it is truly amazing! !

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