Fire In Me Poem by Adam Iron Thorn

Fire In Me

Rating: 5.0


You put the fire in my soul,
And put my pen to this scroll.
With the fire of a thousand hearts,
The immense feelings start.
Lit up my dark life,
Before inserting your knife.
Using my heart as a place to tread,
Causing this gun upside my head.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefanie Fontker 01 September 2011

Interesting rhyming scheme. Rhyming poems aren't my favourites, but this is very beautiful. I like your writing, and I hope to see more from you in the future.

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