Tony Jolley

Rookie (17th June 1958 / England)

Fire On Your Finger - Poem by Tony Jolley

Fire on your finger,
Fire in your eye,
Fire in your spirit,
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Comments about Fire On Your Finger by Tony Jolley

  • Rookie Leigh Milne (1/10/2009 8:19:00 AM)

    i like your poem but you should do some bits that dont ryme and maybe start a line without fire.well done (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Brianna Wilshusen (10/23/2008 7:53:00 AM)

    I like how fire begins each line, its a nice poem, maybe a little work could make it sound more sofisticated but other than that its lovely.9 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points ♥ Brie {And Eric} ♥ (10/17/2008 9:39:00 AM)

    very awsome

    -Brie (Report) Reply








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