Fire... The Love! Im 13 Do Not Judge So Harshly... Lol Poem by Ashley Reeves (male)(13)
Fire... The Love! Im 13 Do Not Judge So Harshly... Lol
fire is reality,
fire is mentallity,
its songs spread destruction,
and its words, eruption.
but think how we associate,
im sure it will make you contemplate,
does it not provide so much more,
its warm glow, thats what its for!
why does the world not treat it right,
and gaze at its magnificent sight!
its hear for us, please use it well,
it can be so much more so much to tell!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/16/2024 6:42:20 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A good effort well chosen words and a clear theme Ashley But you need to learn about meter. The varying line lengths of your poem make it choppy to read aloud Meter is the essential difference between poetry and prose. Try to get hold of a good source book which explains meter and the various poetry forms/.Miller Williams Patterns of poetry or lewis Turcos Book of forms. There are some good sites on the net The poets Garret which will also help you ivor