First Poem by Phoe Jonsen

First

Rating: 5.0


I may be new
I may be unskilled.
I write for a purpose
I write for true love.
I must let it out
I must spill my heart.
I can express
I can say it all.
I will increase
I will let her know.
I feel it so right
I feel it, so wonderful!

Wednesday, October 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I Hope this is the first of many.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edmund Strolis 29 October 2015

Like a force of nature fueled by your love. The energy of a spark turned to a wildfire! Excellent 10

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Fabrizio Frosini 28 October 2015

I Hope this is the first of many. so we do, Phoe.. WELCOME! Cheers

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2015

Poets must write. Keep writing, Phoe

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Phoe Jonsen 29 October 2015

I will keep writing. Thank you for my first comment.

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