First Beautiful Rain Poem by Sameer Ahmed

Well written, you can actually imagine it happening, i actually like the rain so i like this alot!

You are a great writer and this is evidence.the connection is strong throughout.thanks for sharing. Peya

Excellent - I'm sitting here in 30+ celcius, and would really welcome that 'first rain'. N

A beautiful poem, Sameer, combines so well with rain I am observing right now from the window.Very well crafted.Thank you.10+ Best wishes. A.

Lovely poem, rain brings us water the very essence of life.

I Am happy for sulaiman, sameer and andalib, all 3 in 1.

What a complete and beautiful poem! Happy to read you. Keep in touch.

sweet write... refreshing just like rain.... :)

Eloquent, soothing, and refreshing like the rain. Very nice Sameer.

i very much enjoyed this poem. thank you for inviting me to read it and comment. since you did and since there are so few that are as well written as this and that a few simple things i feel would make it even more lovely, i take the permission to say, eliminate 'like' in poetry use the words to say what it is or is not, try to use as few 'THE' 'a' 'and' as possible and still keep the meaning and rythm i would have written, eagerly awaiting freedom from dirt! ' i invite you to read and comment on my new powm i ran. thank you again. good luck,