First Kiss Poem by Not Long Left

First Kiss

Rating: 4.5


Always dissapoinment.
nervously smiling, sweating uncomfortably.
bad breath fearing.
together lips entwining.
is that it?
-first kiss-
that it is:
entwining lips together
fearing bad breath
uncomfortably sweating, smiling nervously.
dissapointment always.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 07 July 2006

first kiss her dreamy eyes the whole week

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Simon Whild 05 November 2005

Each and every one of us has been here at some time. good use of slow and fast pace to bring out the youthful hesitancy. Very poignant.

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