First Love Poem by Amanda Lukas

First Love

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It was as comfortable as a worn set of flannel sheets.
He was my shelter,
a tin roof without a leak.
I was so content and cool
waking up in his strong arms.
And I admit not being able to resist
my tender lover's charms.
I'd gaze at him
in loving awe.
I couldn't help but
look right past
each freckle,
every flaw.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
J M Basey 12 September 2006

Great poem...I remember my first love........Ah memories. Anyway great poem Amanda, Take care, Jay x

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Sydne Morris 25 January 2006

Very good! ! Ya! ! I remember my 'first love' I can so relate Sydne

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Sally Hemingway 09 December 2005

What a charming and thought provoking poem, thank you.

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Ivy Christou 10 November 2005

it is true.. in your first love you can not sense his flaws, you think he is perfect! great work! HBH

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Simon Whild 02 November 2005

Good use of rhyme to lead the poem on. Lovely images.

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Amanda Lukas

Amanda Lukas

Ft. Lauderdale, FL
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