First-Timers Poem by Fay Slimm

First-Timers

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It was a gold-leaf of an evening,
seeping its sheen above and between streaky lines
of sinking gilt clouds.

A mild and forebearing gleam
over-filled lovers' beginnings with exciting notions
of rush into searing emotion.

Clad only in hope, soulmates
overnighting became first-timers amazed at rise of
awesome desire for oneness.

Hazy maybe but we, guiltless,
came to seek love in abundance under a paradise
quilt if only for one single night.

Sure flight from fantasy occurs
only when seizing the real and we left behind all
pretend-time by the morning.

I remember Adventure Island,
and back in refurbished heat, rubbed with sweet
mem'ry love is burnished again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Gogeshvili 24 January 2012

mem'ry love is burnished again. .................................... Hi, Fay - emotion's report very beautifully I am glad that still I listen to your voice here.. :) Tsira.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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