Daniel Lloyd Kennedy

Rookie (Dec.1948 / Lake Forest, Illinois)

Fishees Underwater - Poem by Daniel Lloyd Kennedy

Fish have many pretty colors, they live beneath the waves
Some fish seem to swim in schools while others live in caves
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Comments about Fishees Underwater by Daniel Lloyd Kennedy

  • Rookie Fizzle Stix (8/21/2005 12:33:00 AM)

    Cute - nice idea, but could have been written better. Some of the meter is muddled, and there are commas all over the place! (Report) Reply

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