Daniel Lloyd Kennedy

Rookie (Dec.1948 / Lake Forest, Illinois)

Fishees Underwater - Poem by Daniel Lloyd Kennedy

Fish have many pretty colors, they live beneath the waves
Some fish seem to swim in schools while others live in caves
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Comments about Fishees Underwater by Daniel Lloyd Kennedy

  • Dershish Kebab (12/8/2015 4:16:00 PM)

    Cute children's poem. As Terry Craddock says, would go well in a children's book with illustrations. (Report) Reply

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  • Terry Craddock Terry Craddock (12/8/2015 3:08:00 PM)

    Refreshing with simple rhyme, this poem would easily suit a children's book with background pictures, which children would especially adore, a nice fun poem to start the day :) (Report) Reply

  • Brian Mayo Brian Mayo (12/8/2015 3:02:00 PM)

    Terrific poem, written in a child-like style that suits it perfectly and makes it fun to read.
    Well done. Could be polished a little, but too much would surely diminish it. Great as is. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/8/2015 11:25:00 AM)

    Nice poem dedicated to fish.... (Report) Reply

  • Ratnakar Mandlik (12/8/2015 10:00:00 AM)

    Beautiful narrative describing different species of fishes and pointing out poet's liking for star fish. Enjoyed the uncommon theme and the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Manonton Dalan (12/8/2015 3:22:00 AM)

    I've seen fish not under water.... that's mudfish (Report) Reply

  • Fizzle Stix (8/21/2005 12:33:00 AM)

    Cute - nice idea, but could have been written better. Some of the meter is muddled, and there are commas all over the place! (Report) Reply








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