Fit To Be Tied! Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Fit To Be Tied!

Rating: 5.0


“Tie.”
she queries

“Tie.”
I
affirm.

“In Chinese
...lĭ ngdài.”

I cast the lĭ ngdài
aside.

I stroke her
thigh softly.

“Thigh! ”
I sigh.

“Dàtuĭ ! ”
she smiles

“Wo tànqì! ”
I sigh.

We both act out our sighing.

“Wo tànqì! ”
we sigh together.

“Wo tànqì.. gĕ i nĭ de dàtuĭ ! ”
(“I sigh for...your thighs! ”)

She laughs.

“Tàitai! ”
(“Wife? ”)

“Tàitai! ”
(“Wife! ”)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Dee Wright 06 February 2008

Well, I'll be fit to be tied. Thought I was going to get a bondage poem and end up with loving wordplay and a great title that also plays the game. It's a very loving (and typically you) ...playful poem that is a lot of fun to read. Love it...really love it. love Dee Dee

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Original Unknown Girl 06 February 2008

Hmmm.... love the wordplay here! ! And it was actually the title that drew me in! HG: -) xx

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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