Five Images Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Five Images

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I
A naked body
bronze as the sun
poises against the sky
to dive,
then flings his form
into the tide,
parting waters
without a splash,
like the day sliding
beneath the sky.

II
The day is sliding
beneath the sky,
slipping away soundlessly,
like a diver
parting waters without a splash.

III
The bronze that tanned his body
slips below the lip of earth,
as bit by bit blue turns to gray;
And the sea darkens as it swallows
the single diver and the sun.

IV
The day drains
beneath the sky
as the lip of earth
fuses with and enters
the blue-gray parted waters
of the eastern sky,
and stars bit by bit
find their light.

V
The sun beneath the sky
so silently sank away,
I had not noticed its descent,
until I rubbed my eyed from strain
and turned on the light.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
george george 06 October 2009

what a cool idea to illuminate one concept in several ways............ each one does the trick wonderfully well

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Ben Gieske 08 June 2009

Very fastinating. An illustration of the fact that at first sight we might not see all that we are looking at but if we prolong our looking we see so many more things there. And it is not just a fact of what we see but also of what our other senses contribute. A poem worth reading more than once, even though the last stanza has a certain finality to it.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 May 2009

The last image brings the first person singular of this poem into the scene and unite all the images in a single totality. A poem composed of images like still life paintings. Personification of the day is wonderful. Regards Naseer

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