Bri Edwards

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Five Lines Left...... [short Poetry; Using Up Page] - Poem by Bri Edwards

I've four lines left on this page.
Now three lines left, I do gauge.
What can I do...., left with only two?
If I knew, I'd be known as a sage.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

ok, so i had five lines left at the bottom of my notebook page.
one line for a title, plus four more. i suppose i could have drawn a picture.

Comments about Five Lines Left...... [short Poetry; Using Up Page] by Bri Edwards

  • (6/15/2016 10:23:00 AM)


    bri,
    these four lines confirmed that you are a sage
    bro.
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  • (5/20/2016 1:55:00 PM)


    Hi Bri, This is actually pretty profound....how many times do we engage the question....What would would you do if you knew you only had xxxx number of days....? ? I don't know. But if I did, I'd be sage. Great poem....short and sweet... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 23, 2013


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