Five Reasons You Are No Good Poem by Mitta Xinindlu

Five Reasons You Are No Good

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You are a very bad substance that I got addicted to.
I find your advantages less than your disadvantages.
You make me forget of the important aspects in my life.
You leave me broke and out every time.

You are a heartbreaker;
You leave my heart and needs unattended.
You cause me heartaches every now and then.
You bring cruelty out of my innocent heart.
You even kept me away from the Lord.

You are a bad influence;
You make me dirty, and keep me stuck in a dustbin.
You cause me to stink and be a bad company to the world.
You keep convincing me of things that are not there.
You make me see things your way, leading me out of my good way.

You are a murderer;
You suffocate me and I am now lost with no direction.
I am lonely and cold.
I refuse to get help because you seem to be strong.
You have situated yourself deep down in my veins.

You are a deceiver;
You cause me to think that I will be nothing without you.
You make me think that I can not live with out you.
You make me think that you are a good part of my life.
You make me believe that the world revolves around you.

These are the same reasons that made me see that you are just nothing.

Monday, March 24, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernest Makuakua 12 December 2015

beautiful piece you wrote there lady

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Pheko Motaung 17 July 2014

Well done! Thank you for acting timeously and denouncing this scourge in our society.Every young person who wants to do drugs must read this strong poem

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Onesimo Odwa Mabovula 09 July 2008

well you really out did yourself on this one its pure class and nothing less.I wonder do you do drugs or do you really allow yourself to love that much

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Subbaraman N V 25 March 2008

It is a nice realization- though belated! Hope you have not lost the essential!

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Marvin Brato 24 March 2008

Sometimes, like can be tricky. You become obsess with things you thought are horrible, but these are the same things that sustain you to live or love! High marks Mitta!

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