Flames Poem by Alavi Maliha
Flames
Oh my, spread love
Don't let the flowers die tonight
Oh no, let it flow
Shade the tears up right
Teardrops under the shade of rain
Or the fire that's burning within
Let the flames turn out
Into the oblivion of nothing
It's true sometimes we need to express our pains, but we fail miserable often... A well written poem Alavi.. Thanks for sharing..
Pleased to see here great poets to have a good word to say on your poesy, dear Alavi.Glad to see that I was not wrong estimating as great your talent.
the fire that's burning within Let the flames turn out Into the oblivion of nothing - spread love........ a very fine poem dear poetess
Spread love, dont let the flowers die Teardrops and fire, and rain. so many wonderful images coined up in a poem. lovely verses. thank you dear poetess. tony
Beautiful train of thought, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. LET THE FLAMES TURN OUT INTO THE OBLIVION OF NOTHING - what a line! Thanks for sharing Alavi. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
''into the oblivion of nothing..'' I like it.. nicely penned, Alavi. Keep on writing Blessings
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A nicely written piece, Alavi. Thanks
thank you :)