Flee To Sea Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Flee To Sea

Rating: 5.0


decorate with sweetened voice
and humble lovely imagery
all dripping in tangles blue
cast up by a nymph melody

by which they eagerly sailed to express
velvet waters are circled and sway
peacefully upon glowing reefs
merely a very special haven

one continuous shimmering breeds
along the curled rip of harmony
however strange it may feel
across this melodrama sea

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Juan Carlos Abeti)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Gale 20 May 2009

A great write. God bless all who love-MJG.

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Joseph Poewhit 21 May 2009

Dreamy poem------

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Pictures and music flow flow with beauty and harmony in this lovely piece of poetry. A delight to read. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ejaz Khan 21 May 2009

Beautifu poem, where the songs of nymphs are mingling with the sound of ocean. 10++++

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Ravi A 21 May 2009

Being close to sea, you know the heart of the sea. Well.

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

You do seem to choose your words as if choosing a rare sea-plant. Very soothing.

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Eyan Desir 02 June 2009

Nice imgination u bring out there

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Omar Ibrahim 31 May 2009

wonderful piece...........keep it up

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Seema Chowdhury 30 May 2009

very nice and pleasing poem.

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Enchanting imagery and theme. Deep water too! 10 Karin Anderson

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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