Flow Through Darkness Poem by Michael Carlson

Flow Through Darkness

Rating: 2.7


I stand on the brink
Staring down into the black
I hated all those shrinks
Now I'm standing at the edge of this crack

There are no chains to stop my fall
Why don't you all
Just watch and stare
Like it's just a show

I let go
And in the dark I flow
But instead of it being a show
I'm actually really dead
And all you people still stand and stare ahead....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reyna Julia 26 January 2009

For thelast few poems that i read you sound really mad. That doesn't mean that the poems are bad. It just means that the poems have had an overall mad feeling.

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